Everyday Lojban B01, Dubious Places

Give the text and its current translation, a comment, a sugestion for correction, and mark it once it has been corrected.

Text	Translation	Comment	Suggestion	Corrected
I'm on a mission in another city''	mi ca jdali'u le drata tcadu	"Mission" is polysemous. Is it a religious mission, a diplomatic mission, or what? Another city than what? Apparently than the one your wife is in, but is she also on a mission?
B: Short hair is very exciting.	lo tordu kerfa cu traji loni se nelci	I'm not sure how to render 'exciting'. Wasn't there a word for sexual attraction?	Should be 'is superlative in the property of sexual attractiveness'
B: Didn't you see it before?	.i xu do na pu'o viska	The traslation seems to be incorrect. "pu'o" makes the lojban sentence strange.	"pu" or "puku" instead of "pu'o".
First Jack, then Judith in March, now Kate...	.i la djek. pamoiroi go'i .i babo la djudyt. ca lo cibma'i .i caku la keit	"pamoiroi" doesn't seems to be the right word.	"pamoi" instead of"pamoiroi".
B: I? No!	xu mi .i na djuno	In this situation the speaker must not be really asking about the truth, but must just be confused.	mi ki'a .i na djuno
B: No! Why do you think I know?	.ienai na go'i .i do pensi lonu go'e kei mu'i ma	The explanation reads: "Double negation. With the second {na} we restore the original affirmation by negating it twice." The explanation does't seem right. It is not double negation. It is single negation.	Remove the explanation.

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